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Sitting next to a glass wall
I watch in horror the plot unfolding
Shifting wildly from calm to chaos
The screams in the air and the sound of sirens
The tears hit the ground as a family falls apart

A tempest shrieks within her soul
As she breaks down in the shadows
They hold her close and whisper to her lies
Losing strength she comes to believe them
Her world of glass shatters in the wind

A girl covered in bruises looks down at her hands
Metal with stars bouncing off it in the moonlight
She holds in gently against her skin
Hoping to escape it all for awhile
The memories she despise fall from her in crimson rain

I watch the final night as punches fall down on her
She stands before the mirror with a gun in her hand
We look each other in the eye as I scream for her to stop
She cries out to no one as she clenches the trigger
We fall down as childhood dolls let go of too soon

We lay there separated by my wall of glass
On one side I lay as a blue pile with glass slippers and crown
And her with eyes running black and pale lines dancing on skin
A pale and broken face the only thing tying us together
As we draw our final breath I hear a clock strike midnight
Forgetting Cinderella
Just a bit of practice after some time off. Thoughts are much appreciated


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Jay Lynn
Artist | Hobbyist | Literature
United States
Current Residence: United States
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Favourite genre of music: Pretty much anything
Favourite photographer: Josh Rowan
Favourite style of art: Literature
MP3 player of choice: my phone ;)
Shell of choice: hermit crab
Skin of choice: Well I am kinda partial to my own...............
Favourite cartoon character: all of them
Personal Quote: " It's hard to feel hope when pain is all you know."
It's like looking in a fun house mirror that was given a life of it's own, a number the only thing that sets me apart from the multitudes. The second you awake from this unnatural sleep they brand you ,claiming you as their's, 46492 that is what I am. In our world those who deter from what they consider normal are considered dangerous and are neutralized. This is the world I live in, if this pathetic excuse for existence can be called living, where clones serve masters who created us in their exact image. I sit and wait for them to come for me as I wipe my "master's" blood from my hands.

Pondering continuing this plot. What do you all think?
  • Mood: Tired
  • Listening to: N/A
  • Reading: my paper
  • Watching: Supernatural
  • Playing: N/A
  • Eating: N/A
  • Drinking: Coffee

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baileyalice222 Featured By Owner May 15, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
thanks for the favs :D Hug 
pinkythepink Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Professional Artisan Crafter
:blowkiss: Hello! I'm going through favorites I've missed in the past and thanking people, so bear with me for taking so long to give a personal reply.
:iconrubcheeksplz: Thank you SO much for your support by adding my first daily deviation to your favorites back in 2012. :giggle: A long time ago, I know! But I had to thank you sometime!

This is a formal invitation to come and see where my gallery has gone since then, since I believe I've vastly improved. :love: If you don't care for it no harm done and I won't bother you anymore. :D
debNise Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the fav :hug:
Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Professional Writer
Thanks very much for faving my work!
Frozen-song Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
Thank you very much for the fave! :D
Cybeliztixxx Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014
thank you so much for the fav i truly appreciate it! Heart 
DespicableMe1 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the favs!
Black-B-o-x Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014
Thank you for the faves :) :rose:
Cybeliztixxx Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014
thanks for the fav much appreciated!! Heart 
kimsol Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014

Thanks so much for faving! :iconbark-plz:

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