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It's like looking in a fun house mirror that was given a life of it's own, a number the only thing that sets me apart from the multitudes. The second you awake from this unnatural sleep they brand you ,claiming you as their's, 46492 that is what I am. In our world those who deter from what they consider normal are considered dangerous and are neutralized. This is the world I live in, if this pathetic excuse for existence can be called living, where clones serve masters who created us in their exact image. I sit and wait for them to come for me as I wipe my "master's" blood from my hands.

Pondering continuing this plot. What do you all think?
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Opinion Wanted

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Some of you might have noticed my latest peice that I am considering continuing as a modern day meets ancient ledgend epic poem but on a smaller scale. It is based on the Greecan ledgend of Orpheus and Eurydice focusing on his journey to find her and maybe some of what see in the Underworld, I named it "Death of Beauty". I would appreciate if you guys would tell if you think I should continue it and maybe if you see a way I can impove it PLEASE share I love to hear what you think and see.
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~GREEN~
[x] You are told that you make people happy.
[x] You help the environment.
[ ] You donate lots of money to organizations.
[x] You have a pet.
[x] You have a lot of plants in your house.
[x] You like camping.
[ ] You dress practical.
[ ] You give your old clothes to the Salvation Army.
Total: 4

~ORANGE~
[x] You are loud.
[/] You have a phone with a keyboard.
[ ] You play basketball.
[x] You are outgoing.
[x] You are unique.
[x] You like being creative.
[ ] You aren't afraid to show your true feelings.
[ ] You want to be a forensics scientist, an FBI agent, or something along those lines. (Crime Scene Investigator)
Total:4.5

~PINK~
[ ] You follow trends.
[ ] You are considered preppy.
[ ] You straighten your hair every day.
[ ] You only buy name brand clothes.
[ ] You like cute things.
[ ] You love small dogs.
[ ] You listen to mainstream music.
[ ] You get your nails done.
Total: 0

~YELLOW~
[ ] Summer is your favorite season.
[ ] You love to tan.
[x] Birds are one of your favorite animals.
[x] You are laid back.
[x] You would rather spend a day with your close friends at your house than going out partying.
[x] You like lemon in your soda.
[ ] You mostly drink water
[x] You spend a lot of time watching TV or on the computer.
Total: 5

~WHITE~
[x] You are often bored.
[ ] You aren't very creative.
[x] You spend a lot of time relaxing.
[x] You like to save money.
[x] You listen to classical music.
[ ] You play piano.
[x] You try not to judge people.
[x] You don't like shopping for clothes.
Total: 6

~BLACK~
[x] You shop at Hot Topic.
[ ] you wear black eyeliner and/or nail polish.
[x] You are often depressed.
[ ] People call you Gothic or emo.
[x] You always type in black font on MSN.
[x] Night is your favorite time of day.
[ ] You hate school.
[/] You listen to metal music. (I listen to everything)
Total: 4.5

~BROWN~
[x] You often wear neutral colors such as brown, tan, gray, and white.
[ ] You just like to blend in.
[ ] You are very shy.
[x] Fall is your favorite season.
[x] You get good grades in school.
[/] You like the same kind of music as most of your friends.
[ ] You wear your hair up most of the time.
Total: 3.5

Well Apparently I have a white aura.
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British
[x] You drink a lot of tea.
[ ] You know what a brolly is.
[ ] Deal or No Deal has taken over your life.
[ ] You wanted Ben to win X Factor.
[ ] You use the word "bugger"or the phrase "bloody hell."
[ ] Fish and Chips are yummy.
[ ] You can eat a Full English Breakfast.
[ ] You dislike emos almost as much as you dislike chavs.
[ ] Its football...not soccer.
Total: 1

Australian
[ ] You wear flip flops all year.
[ ] You call flip flops thongs not flip flops.
[x] You love a backyard barbie.
[x] You know a barbie is not a doll.
[x] You love the beach.
[ ] Sometimes you swear without realizing.
[ ] You're a sports fanatic.
[ ] You are tanned.
[ ] You're a bit of a bogan.
[ ] You have an Australian something
Total: 3

Italian
[ ] The Sopranos is a great show.
[ ] Your last name ends in a vowel.
[x] Your grandmother makes her own sauces.
[ ] You know how a real meatball tastes.
[x] You know Italian songs.
[x] You have dark hair and dark eye color.
[ ] You speak some Italian.
[x] You are under 5'10''
[x] You know what a Italian horn is
[x] Pizza/spaghetti is the best food in the world!
[x] You talk with your hands.
Total: 7

Spanish
[ ] You say member instead of Remember.
[x] You speak Spanish or some.
[x] You like tacos.
[ ] YoU TyPe lIkE ThIs On Da CoMpUtEr.
[ ] You are dark skinned.
[ ] You know what a Puta is.
[x] You talk fast occasionally.
[ ] You have had highlights or have dyed your hair.
[ ] You know what platanos are.
Total: 3

Russian
[ ] You say villian as: Vee-lon.
[x] You get short tempered.
[x] You know of somebody named Natasha.
[x] You get cold easily.
[x] Rain is fun for you.
[ ] You get into contests all the time.
[ ] You can easily make do with the cold weather.
Total: 4

Irish
[ ] You think beer is the best.
[x] You have a bad temper.
[x] Your last name starts with a Mc, Murph, O', Fitz or ends with a ley, on, un, an, in, ry, ly, y.
[ ] You have blue or green eyes.
[x] You like the color green.
[ ] You have been to a St. Paddy's Day party.
[x] You have a family member from
Ireland.
[x] You have hair.
[x] You have/had freckles.
[ ] Your family get togethers always include drinking and singing.
Total: 6

African American
[ ] You say nigga/nukka casually
[ ] You have nappy hair.
[ ] You like rap.
[/] You know how to shoot a gun. (somewhat)
[ ] You think President George Walker Bush is racist.
[x] You like chicken.
[x] You like watermelon.
[ ] You can dance.
[x] You can 'sing' gospel.
Total: 3.5

Asian
[ ] You have slanty/small eyes.
[x] You like rice a lot.
[ ] You are good at math.
[x] You have played the piano.
[ ] You have family from Asia.
[x] You laugh sometimes covering your mouth.
[x] Most people think you're Chinese.
[ ] You call hurricanes typhoons.
[ ] You go to Baulko.
Total: 4

German
[x] You like bread.
[x] You think German Chocolate is good.
[ ] You Speak some German.
[ ] You know what Schnitzel is.
[x] You went to Pre-school.
[x] You're over 5'2.
Total: 4

Canadian
[ ] You like/play/played hockey.
[ ] You love beer.
[x] You say eh.
[ ] You know what poutine is.
[ ] You speak some french.
[ ] You love Tim Horton's.
[ ] At one point you lived in a farm house.
[x] You watch/watched degrassi.
Total: 2
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[ ] smoked.
[x] consumed alcohol. (I was was 5 and stole some sour apple pucker)
[x] slept in the same bed with someone of the opposite sex. (family)
[x] slept in the same bed with someone of the same sex. (family)
[ ] kissed someone of the same sex.
[ ] had sex.
[x] had someone in your room other than family. (hasn't everybody)
[ ] watched porn.
[ ] bought porn.
[ ] tried drugs.

TOTAL: 4

[x] taken painkillers. (cramps)
[ ] taken someone else's prescription medicine.
[x] lied to your parents. (I think we all have done it once)
[x] lied to a friend. (Yeah...)
[x] snuck out of the house.  (for a good reason)
[ ] done something illegal.
[x] felt hurt. (Duh, who haven't? -_-)
[x] hurt someone. (Same as above)
[x] wished someone to die.
[ ] seen someone die.

TOTAL: 3

[ ] missed curfew.
[ ] stayed out all night.
[x] eaten a carton of ice cream by yourself
[x] been to a therapist.
[ ] received a ticket.
[ ] been to rehab
[ ] dyed your hair.
[x] been in an accident. ( I was six)
[ ] been to a club.
[ ] been to a bar.
TOTAL: 3


[ ] been to a wild party
[ ] been to a Mardi Gras parade.
[ ] drank more than three alcoholic beverages in a night.
[ ] had a spring break in Florida.
[ ] sniffed anything
[x] wore black nail polish
[x] wore arm bands.
[x] wore t-shirts with band names.
[ ] listened to rap.
[ ] owned a 50 Cent CD.

TOTAL: 3


[x] dressed gothic
[x] dressed girly. (Hate my friends sometimes)
[ ] dressed punk.
[ ] dressed grunge.
[ ] stole something.
[ ] been too drunk to remember anything.
[x] blacked out.
[X] fainted.
[x] had a crush on a neighbor. (HA!)
TOTAL: 5

[x] had a crush on a friend.
[x] been to a concert.
[ ] dry-humped someone.
[ ] been called a slut
[ ] called someone a slut
[ ] installed speakers in your car.
[ ] broken a mirror.
[ ] showered at someone of the opposites sex's house.  
[x] brushed your teeth with someone else's toothbrush. (Best friend)

TOTAL:3

[ ] considered Ludacris your favorite rapper.
[ ] seen an R-rated movie in theater.
[x] cruised the mall.
[x] skipped school. ( Dad took me to a Skillet concert)
[ ] had surgery.
[ ] had an injury.
[ ] walked out of a restaurant without paying/tipping.
[ ] gone to court
[x] caught something on fire. ( Accidentally)
[ ] lied about your age.

TOTAL: 3
[ ] owned/rented an apartment/house.
[ ] broke the law in the police's presence.
[ ] made out with someone who had a gf/bf
[ ] got in trouble with the police.
[x] talked to a stranger. (Yeah, I think we all have at some point)
[x] hugged a stranger. ( I am a strange person but now we are are pretty close)
[ ] kissed a stranger.
[ ] rode in the car with a stranger.
[x] been harassed.
[x] been verbally harassed.
TOTAL: 4


[ ] met face-to-face with someone you met online.
[x] talked on the phone for more than 4 hours straight.
[x] watched TV for 5 hours straight.
[x] been to a fair.
[ ] been called a bad influence.
[ ] drank and drove.
[x] prank-called someone. ( Long story...........)
[x] laid on a couch with someone of the opposite sex.
[ ] cheated on a test.

TOTAL: 5

Total in all: 38
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